Monday, September 13, 2010

I'm stuck on English lyrics!

Ok I'm seriously stuck on writing English lyrics. So I'm gonna give it a shot by just typing anything I like below. Supposedly, lyrics are meant to rhyme, but I don't know how to rhyme it yet so let me give it a shot then. Here goes my first attempt:

Ok good hmmmm... err... ya.... What topic should I write about?

Ok last night before I slept I thought of something that I could write, that is expression of rain.

Rain has 4 different types as I categorised it. Drizzle, heavy rain, storm, a sudden rain that would go quickly. Let's start with drizzle.

Dizzle

Drizzle drizzle it starts to drizzle
no one seems disturbed
to open their umbrella
As what I saw....

everyone has a smile on their face

Dizzle drizzle it starts to drizzle
I looked upon the sky
the skies are blue and clear
the sun is smiling to me

everyone express their happiness on their face

And I ...

Stepped my foot into the puddle
splish splash splish splash creating my rhythmn
I love the rain drops falling on me
it just going to cool the heat on me

And I

Start to walk into the drizzle
dancing my way all the way to school
Oh no my textbooks are getting wet
But not to worry that they would get drenched

Ok done. How come it sounds like children songs?! Ok not bad my first nusery song. The major problem is how to rhyme them.

Drizzle drizzle it starts to drizzle
no one seems disturbed but start to giggle
When you start to open their umbrella "bo kle"
Oh no! Stare! Just go home eat your pringles


Dizzle drizzle it starts to drizzle
I looked upon the sky
it looks so high
the droplets starts to fall and drop into my eye
and the sun is laughing at me

And I ...

Stepped my foot into the puddle
splish splash splish splash making it muddle
I love the rain drops falling on me
it just going to cool the heat on me

And I

Start to walk into the drizzle
dancing my way all the way to school
but unpreventable
my textbooks are getting wet
and so is my hat
But not to worry that they would get drenched

Oh my god!
I finished it. So what will it sound like? I will upload in my next post.

MY VIDEO!